by Areyoucrazy Jun 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The sun has been hidden as the clouds roll in |
by Kymberly
good poem! Your a awsome writer! Keep it up! =D |
by Nee
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
by Richard
i really dont like when people make bad comment because there in not a;lot of rhyme it doesnt have to rhyme all the time and ur poem is a good example of it 5/5 srri i didnt comment i went to watch a movie anyways yeh see ya! |
love it very original!...and thanks so much for your comment on mine. |
by David Paul
I love poems that tell stories even though I can't really write them. Good job. 5/5 kilman = David B. |