by Nici Jun 16, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Wear your conscience on your wrist |
by Little Dot
Super work. You did an wonderful job. |
by N J Thornton
I don't know if this was inspired by the phrase "wear your heart on your sleeve" but it seems that way. You did well to expand on that, and I think it worked well. It reads as an encouraging poem about showing your emotions. I have one suggestion though, second stanza, fourth line, I think you meant "your." |
by Robert
Apart from the fact that its a great poem, its got a great message too. Well done. |
by Nici
'Wear your conscience on your wrist' |
by AlexJ
It was very good, I liked the flow and the choice of words. I didn't understand the first line though "wear your concience on your wrist" what did that mean? |