by Piper
nice rhyming and let the world know how you feel is a great poem 5/5 |
by Jeff
Great message and it has reached me when I am in the middle of the battle of expressing the inner most feelings.Thank you for writting such a good work.Jeff |
Something about this poem i really liked.. good job. You poems are very emotional to me, i didn't find anything wrong, which i usually do.. great job! |
by AJ
Very good message. I really like your style, I'm adding you to my favs. Good job, keep it up. |
Great feel to this peice, and very well written. |
by AlexJ
It was very good, I liked the flow and the choice of words. I didn't understand the first line though "wear your concience on your wrist" what did that mean? |
by Nici
'Wear your conscience on your wrist' |
by Robert
Apart from the fact that its a great poem, its got a great message too. Well done. |
by N J Thornton
I don't know if this was inspired by the phrase "wear your heart on your sleeve" but it seems that way. You did well to expand on that, and I think it worked well. It reads as an encouraging poem about showing your emotions. I have one suggestion though, second stanza, fourth line, I think you meant "your." |
by Little Dot
Super work. You did an wonderful job. |