oh my god, thats such a great poem! Just so beautifully written... but so sad. keep it up 10/5!!

oh zac, i loved it but it was so sad. i'll never hate you. i love you no matter what.

O Zac that such a good pome. But its so so so sad. I hope that your ok. I would absolutley die if anything ever happened to you! Keep up the good writing and stay strong
Much lOVE
~ChELseA

Well, since I will never hate you, that will never happen. I wish so much that I could just make you happy, forever... I'll try and help the best I can. I love you a lot, ok? Hang in there, buddy!
Car

i love it zac. it was beautiful. and sad. ^.^

i really like this poem and its so...painfully sweet...if you get what i mean... but your a fantastic writer so keep it up...5/5

I'm sorry to say this Zac, but I'm anything but speachless. I'm hurt beyond reason to the point where I'm starting to cry. I shouldn't be crying, and I know that. Today's my happy day, but yet I'm still crying. You're reach on me is painful, like you're going to squeeze me to death or suffocate me. The feeling is so new to me, but it's because I care so much about you Zac.

So many people care about you and love you and would die for you, Zac. Never forget that. You're my angel and you were when I was hurting. I healed because you talked me through and was my friend when no one else was. I'll never abandon you, not even if you wanted me to. But I'll help you through this if you'll only tell me what's wrong. I can't fix what's not broken or I can't see. My purpose as your friend is to hold your hand, and while I can't physically hold you when you cry like I wish I could, I can still help you can't I? Zac, I love you soooooo much more than you know or you'll ever comprehend and it kills me that you can still do this to yourself because you may want to die, but I still want to live. And if you die, you're taking my heart with you, and I'll never forgive you for that. And I hope that if you ever decided to cut that much deeper or shoot that bullet through your head you better danm well think of me before you do. I swear to god you hurt me more than you know. You've been on my mind even while I don't have internet almost everyday. I try not to think about you only because I don't want to know if you're going to die, but as long as you still breath, I want to be here for you. When you give up, Zac, I give up. and if you care for me at all, you won't do it.You see, unlike you, I don't have someone who loves me to the point they'd die for me, but if you did Zac, I swear I will die. I wouldn't be able to bear it knowing there's only one of you in the world and you'd left before you could really live.

True words from the heart. Please-it's one thing to hurt yourself, but by hurting yourself you're hurting those who love you, and that's even worse because they're innocent. I'm innocent.

I love you so much!!!!!! Bffe!

~Sierra

I'm completely enchanted by you.

I think IgnorantAngel pretty much said it all (and then some)...you're never alone, and I can see there are plenty of people that don't hate you. But this poem might not even be about you...entirely...and it was a while ago...so i just hope you aren't having thoughts like the ones in that poem. Very well done though.

Thank you sooooooooo much for the comments. Made me smile :) And that's sweet that you care...

undyingblusher
xxx

This stanza--

I’ll remember your voice
And how it soothed my bloody heart
And but a second or two later
My last breath will depart

Just hit home...magnificent! Really...breathtaking and just. wow.