ooooo, *clutches heart as if going to die* That was absolutely killer, Zac!! Aw, omg, that was.............amazing, beautiful, touching, hot, lol, and just......mesmerizing. Do you mind if I post that in my xanga? That would mean so much to me if I could. It's one of those poems that deserve soooo much credit!! Like name in lights type of deal. O....my...god.....ahh! lol! That was....you're just......oh my god, lol, i love you more than ever! It just goes to show how your heart beats. All the more reason to live, right? lol!

You gotta write more poetry like this! This is what most people can relate to!! I mean, I knew you were a good writer, but this is like.....ahh! lol!

soooo good!

~Sierra

should I go through and tell you i love you? I think i shall.

I love you.

this flowed real nice and was very heartfelt I liked it I think the ending was ki9nda odd yes, The ending through it off for me. I think if this person read this she would understand what before meant and your say she never knew. Well it just through me off good try though...

seems innocent, sweet...it's a touching poem. well done.

xxx

I think i do remember posting this in my xanga. It was great...maybe I'll repost it..idk. I kinda stopped using xanga thanks to you for introducing me to myspace, lol!
Well...still. I doubt you'll ever lose your touch. Each poem always gets better and better!