Hello Tom Thank you for the comments on my poems..I Think we both write in the same style.. to the point... I enjoyed reading the poems I could get to.. Unfortunatlly at at work i can not look at any poems that are in the love section.. LOL anything with the word love is blocked out..

I really like this piece.
The tombstone is a powerful image; I think of one that says the word forever on it. Your vague points are yet very specific, making your message obvious.
5/5

BEAUTIFUL :) X