Wow, very emotional poem! It really leaves you with kind of an empty feeling inside. That is what we are all striving for in our poems and is to express our feelings as well as make the reader feel them as well. I think you did a great job. Keep up the good work. Oh, and please check out some of mine. Thank you and take care.

OMG, that poem was so good!! I know exactly what you mean!! I give it a 5/5.*~ Good job. tAyLoR~*