Hey, this is pretty good, i know wut u mean, keep on writing and take care!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

I think the first line of each stanza explains the poem in a nutshell.

Luvvoo forever Ari <33333.
--Kal.

i think that what you have so far is great! maybe a title u can use is just existing, cause i see you have in the title thingy needs a title. but you do what you feel is best. wonderful job! and yes ur at the top of my list!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love!

Oh snap lil slam that's a kick @$$ title! I'll use it! OMFG thanx so much...Peace and Luv and So Many Tite Hugs, //Ari\\

yes what Kalah said it truely does...

-Josiah