oooooh! no w this is a good one! (do you see a pattern emerging, i seem to be starting all my comments with "ooooh!" this is simply my way of expressing that i like a poem) very plaintive. i like it muchly.

yay! spam spam, a poet! i love this poem, its very simple, but very true and beautiful! keep writing lots and lots,

~madfry~

lucy has a bigger vocabulary than me. damnation. *finds thesaurus* an excellently pleasing poem. if you would please disregard the fact i have already commented...i go by what i said before. but im commenting one allllll ya poems now. so dont write anymore. ;) ha. only kidding. write more happy ones, they are rare. i may go write one too...we shall see.