I loved it. Your story flows beautifully. That's something hard to accomplish! I love all of your work and I can't wait to read more.

wow i like this poem too. your really really good.

that is great!! i am terribly depressed at the moment and ive done a couple of really stupid things but i a still here! maybe we could talk to each other and help each other through? i love to listen and i am a counsellor for some of my friends (they are for me too) great poem xxx luv steph. stay strong