by Adinda Jun 16, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
family
A man of normal posture |
Great rhyme scheme and word choice. simple beautiful. keep it up. |
by kiesha
That is really sweet that you wrote this for your dad. Sometimes I wish I could be closer to mine. Take care. |
Aww this is a really nice poem:) keep up the good workxxx |