OOOOH that was SO good!! I really suggest that you make it a trilogy poem, almost like a story. That was really intruiging. 5/5 deffinately.

Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

:: grins happily:: you think I should make it a trilogy poem? really? I didn't think it was That good...

Pretty damn good....but not the best...

~~Nick~~

and btw for the comment to Shortcoming Angels...it was all true...

Hmmm....That wasn't too good but it didn't have a final sound to it (which makes it okay to be a trilogy or some such thing) Okay write.
~Unforgiven