ooooohhhhh thats so sad (tear tear) o loved it 5/5

omg thats such a sad poem....almost made me cry...great job very good choice of words....5/5!!

hey thanks for your comments, I really like this, it flows really well n everything...it was cool to have some input from a guy, and to read this. cause it seems like there're way more girls on this site. but guys write awesome too! keep it up.
~Christina

wow, great poem!! 5/5!

Aww. Nice work, so sad.

very good!! i knew i shudnt expect any less.. (as if i did).. this one was reli gr8 too.. and if i havent sed it b4, ur rhyme was amazing and ur words are reli touching, even tho am not a love poem kinda girl, wich goes to show...hehe.. i absolutely love ur style.. u got my 5, along with my love, respect, and appreciation..
God bless
keep up the talent
nouna
im thinkin ull look better in my favorites ;)

its touching !