Comments : Models

  • 19 years ago

    by !*!Zoe!*!

    Oh Julia, this is fantastic. I love the line where you talk about swimming alive in the dream. That just blew me away. Gorgeous poem. One thing, "add" should only have one 'd'.
    xoxZoexox

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie

    Wow I love this poem wonderful job! I wrote one with the same tittle.