Funeral song

by Elynnka   Jun 16, 2005


Walking down an empty street,
Rose petals fall at my frozen feet,
I can hardly feel my hands and toes
What has happened no one knows...

My eyes go blind in rays of sun
My dreadful demise has just begun
No one to save me, no one to care
Of how much pain I have to bear...

A cold tear slips down my tired face,
A drop of blood to fill an empty space,
A cry for help risen from pain,
A shattered dark heart that’s always to blame…

A funeral song that echoes in the night
Instills fear in those who abandoned a fight
And is an anthem for those who are left to die
Alone, underneath the darkened sky…

We go through each day, living the same:
In failure, strife and swollen pain,
This funeral song will last until the end
Of this dreadful world of sins and pretend…

** please tell me what you think... i haven't written in a long time and i'm not sure of this poem, thx.**

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tarikins

    Interesting.

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    I think this is excellent! Keep it up! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Nil

    i think this poem is very good. you're very talented, great writing style.