by Lauren Jun 16, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Impure thoughts stain my mind |
by Brigitte
Another simply perfect poem from you! I loved how you repeated the last line and also made it the title of your poem! |
It really needs work |
by Leanne
Youre a great writer! keep up the good work! gr8 hun |
good poem keep up the good work.. crissie |
This poem was completely awesome...i like your use of different words...not that many people on here to that..keep on writing. |