This is good.. so are alot of ur other poems.. it's good that ur honest about stuff like this cuz most people are oblivious to the obvious..

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Wow, this is such an awesome, extrodinary and true poem. Wow lol, i wish i could give you a ten but, it only goes up to 5. lol
ill expect more awesome poems from you

I like this poem it's unique, life can be hard at times

Whoa....angry much??? JK

That is very true.. the truth does hurt

Thats a good poem because its real you know?!!and it describes lots and lots of people. i love it!

Very emotional, maybe u could build off the strength of the emotion into a slightly more stanza-ish form. but nonetheless i think u've got strong imagery. much love.

Nice one it has truth to it go check out my live & die poem and my truth & lies poem

Hey really good poem..ur right the truth hurts

Such a good, hardhitting, true poem. its really moving n just makes u think about life. ur poems inspire thought, well done, u have talent

I really like this poem and its so true the truth does hurt...u r extremely talented...look forward to reading more of ur poems...

I liked this one very much..5/5

Hi thanks for reading my poem.trying to get it out ,so people will try to understand what i child really goes through,and the sad thing is,they do it alone
I like your writing and plan on reading more ,a little at a time,,so thanks again, and keep up the good work,,,,,,,,,Tracy

Pretty good poem, I have my feelings about the nature of mankind but it's just my opinion. A lot of people are considered hypocrites, but I think it's all pretty natural to be that, since minds change constantly. Anyway good job and I'd like to read more sad poems from you.