Memories of you

by Italian Stallion   Jun 17, 2005


The times we've had together.
Are memories that will last forever.
Sometimes we laughed.
Sometimes we cried.
For we did not care,
What other people thought.
For we were together.
And that's all that mattered.
Now the time has come.
And I am no longer loved,
By the girl I loved the most.
The end has come.
But I am neither mad nor sad.
For we have made many happy memories together.
Those will last forever.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Mmm sad poem. I love the simplicity you started with as a poet.
    I love poems where feelings are revealed that way, cause many ppl may relate to that. NOt personally but this was wel written.. and truthfully.

    5/5 being ur 1st

  • 16 years ago

    by shadowknight

    This is a short and sweet poem that i absolutely adore!!!!
    It one of those poems, that you'll look back on in 10 years and say, " i'm a freakin' awesome poet"

    my fav bit is
    "But I am neither mad nor sad.
    For we have made many happy memories together."

    Its a great poem, that expresses so much

    5/5

    I can relate though

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow, for such a sad conclusion of a poem i never read such a happy ending. i didnt expect the ending like that, very well wriiten

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That was good but it wasn't great. The diction was okay but there were great lines in it.
    ~DFTI

  • 19 years ago

    by Juls

    Wow hun..
    I loved it. The poem was sad but you have talent..and lots of it Joe!!!
    Thanks for commenting on my poems by the way(there is one on there bout you!!!) anyway great work

    Juls

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