by Char Jun 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Hey everyone... Well here is another one... Still a beginner. Would love some insight or other comments on what was good. Vote and comment if you want, I would greatly appreciate it! Thank you so much! |
that is so good!! its long but it was worth the time! i loved reading it. xxx |
by Andrea
i like this poem too! great job! |
by Nikki Pixie
I love this poem..it means so much! It kinda relates to my life by the person judging me...Please write more. |
this is nothing but short amazing .. it inspires me.. i loved this... great write beautiful write acctaully for a beginer you are one of the best ive read from so far.. 5/5 from me keep it up and stay strong ... sabrina |
by LOOPE
wow, I just love this poem. It's excellent, and you say you're still a beginner? that's got to be a lie. Anyways, I also recently began to write poems as well. And mine don't sound as good. But that's ok, because I have great inspiration from all you great writters. (tears falling) this poem is so emotional and touching. 5/5 great job, keep it up and take care. |