hey sounds familair babe lol if ya know what i mean we werent together but he broke my heart i love him still n always will i luv ya too sweety

great poem!! it flows so well!! FINALLY a person who knows how to make a poem flow!! great job! 5/5!

maybe you could check out some of mine!?

omg that reminds me of my poem gave you my all. this was an excellent poem i loved it!!! 5/5

Very well written and so true! I have looked back over the years and thought I was a complete fool. It's true other people always see it first we are the last ones to open our eyes. Probably because we don't want it to be true! Good work! Take Care! Brooke~

nice job!

good...keep writing!

the flow was a bit rough but nice job....luv yas mwah

-kayla-