I've heard that line before...... don't fall too hard girl. Or else. It's a great poem tho.

Aww . . . that was an awesome poem!!! I loved it . . . I can REALLY realate to it!!! Hey, if you get the chance, take a look at some of my poems and comment and vote, cuz it would mean the world to me more than you know!!! Great poem though . . . 5/5 all the way!!!
*Lisa*

Xcellent poem i know what you aer going through been there done that it hurts if you fall to hard make sure he is there to catch you before you fall.

that was a great poem keep ^ the good work i gave you a 5/5 ........will you read my new poem "The cost of love" and tell me how i did thanx~x~Kayla~x~

i can really relate at this time in my life. great job

wonderful poem, i love the repetition of that one stanza, deep and conveys beautiful emotion :)

Very nice!!!

Very good poem! I liked it a lot!

neat!!!

i know

Well written 5/5!

awesome
keep going gurl
its the best i ever read
nema
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