by Renee
This was a good poem. It had a good comparison and story. I would've like to hear more about that comparison though. Like, go deeper about the firewall. and also, the last line, |
ouch... sorry if i dont give it the comment it deserves its really good but im just a lil pissed off right now (nothing to do with u hun) anyway im gona try and focus on your poem (very hard) well i thought it was good with great flow and rhyme pattern well done |
by Gianna
wow great poem... you put your words together very good i love it 5/5 |
by Brookeღ
Very well done! Nice amount of detail and good flow throughout! Very creative way of putting things into perspective! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by Carmen
omg, that was so sad! i loved how your words just fit together perfectly... great poem! 5/5 |
wow....this is one of my favorite poems ever! great job and please dont stop wrighting! |
Very well written! enjoyed it!! keep up the great work! you flowed it nicely and worded it in very well! 5/5 |
aww thats sad. grat job though. keep writing:) |
by Vanessa Lea
Great work, it definately deseves the great rating that it has! Eager to read more! |
by Darien
Good use of metaphors! Awesome job :) |