by TaSarah
I have these feelings too, but I have never gone through with the act of actually cutting myself. I dont have the guts to. I really do like your poem though. |
wow... amazing!!!!! wow... i absolutely love it! very nicely written. you are seriously talented. keep it up!!! |
by LAST RONIN
I have been there my Texan friend..your pome is like a story from my head.. Very well done.. I have to say I have favrotism to Suicide poems thats wha tI mostly wirte lately.. but my hat off to you.. well done.. keep writing 6.41 on Ronin 6.66 scale |
by Marjan
wow...This is really so great. it has a good flow. really wonderfull. |
Great flow and just a great poem all around. keep up the good work m8. -Mike |
by ASPHYXIATED
wow it was like you were explaining me if that even make sense all i know is that when i read that poem i pulled down my sleeve and covered my arm dunno why just happened....man the poem flowed so well not a single flaw:( i like pointing out flaws j/k...5/5 for sure. |
This is a very deep poem. i really liked it. Keep it up. |
by Brookeღ
Very intense! I don't cut but you painted the picture well! Nice detail! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by Kia
i really really like this poem... i share these feelings and this stanza here i really relate too |
by AJ
That describes the thoughts and feelings of probablly alot of people. Good job. Very intense, I like it. |
by Jason Meres
"As it dries I put up the knife and end the hate crime" |
Omg...this poem is soo awesum i luvd it...it has a lot of meaning...keep up the great work..ill check out some more of ur poems.. |
by Sarah Ann
Wow...I loved that poem it was very good...The repitition in particular places made it stand out...It was simply magnificent. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. 5/5 xxx |
by †JustAriâ€
omfg this......cannot be put into words. :D I reeeeeeeeeeeally like it! 5/5 definitely it's very deep...Peace! //ari\\ |
by Marjan
very beautifully written as I have said |
I wish i could say something good about this, because it was a good poem. but..i can't. because it reminds me of the way i'm not supposed to be. |
by Sarah Ann
Very deep, your poem had a strong sense of imagery...like I can actually see it happening. I don't cut but I had thoughts like this at times. Your poems are written with such powerful emotions, it really grabs the reader's attention. |
by Rolo
Wow. Very powerful. You kept me reading, and the flow was great. Touching and excellent. 5/5. |
by Richard
wow this is really good i will 5/5 can u read my poem the 1 u commetned scepter of love i delted it was really bad lol i amde new one tis called angel#1 (you being I) please comment thx |
nicely written. |