Wonderful poem and it is really well done, i liked each line, they each told a story of their own and it is definately one of your better peices i can tell without even looking at any of your others. Very well done.

Five/Five

Signed,
Dark Savior

P.S. Thank you for your comment and or vote on my poem i really appreciate it, yes it is the emma from the site to answer your question :). Well gotta go, work calls.