aww. this was soo good. great job. thanks for the comment! :-)

beautiful, reminds me of my best friend Katy, we had so much fun together, we have been friends for over 30 years, and everything is great between us now, we went through some quite times, but last week she called and things are great again, I will always love her, thank you for reminding me of my youth....love Becky

i love that..it reminds me of the days, that i long to relive..write more..:-) for the good of the people..!

Beautiful, as Becky said, Brought back a lot of memories from my childhood days and all my friends. Great job.

hugs and love, Ann

this is also a wonderfully writen poem you have writen! you too have talent within!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

amazing poem, loved it! 5/5

love mark xxx

Great poem! It was really realistic. Keep writing & thanks for your comments on my poetry... You've got a lot of talent yourself!
-Kate