*sits gobsmacked* You've done it again Lucy! Another master piece! Take a bow! I LOVE it!!!!! I really like the way it starts and goes on really unhappily and (there's that word again) morbidly but it actually turns out to be really optimistic. It's a really original and new idea and I LOVE IT!!!

that is now my new favorite poem of yours it was fabulous (sorry if it is spelt wrong)
allalone

Luciferous, i cant beleive i havent commented on this poem. it's one of my al time favourites, and i cant believe i havent told you! i feel terrible. :O here goes: i love this poem so much! the wonderful imagery, and the way its so sad and yet so happy. the dismantling of a soul, and the creation of a new one!!! how fabtaboulous. i love it so much, and it evoked such strong imagery, i had to draw a picure. however, i cannot draw and the picture is awful, but the picture in my head is still brilo pads. now i think i have said enough, i hope this makes up for not commenting previously.

~madfry~

p.s. write more, i havent seen enough lucy poems. go! shoo!

*Jaw drops*... Wow. I am out of words. Speechless. Wow.
Wow.
Wow.
WOW.
You are the best poet on this site that I have seen. Wow. Keep it up.
Thanks for the comments on mine. =D

Brilliant work. this is really unique, with great flow and fantastic imagery. very well done, it's morbidly beautiful.

Once again, a captivating work of poetry that drags the reader in to the very core... uve woven an amazing poem from almost magical words.. they were music to my ears.. i give u a 5 easily, and more if i cud, coz u certainly deserve it.. tho it was sad n sincere, it was still nothing short of a literary piece..
ur very talented
keep it up
take care
Nouna

Righty darling. I decided I didn't read people poetry enough so I am now reading every sigle one of yours. Even though I've read several before. I just have to say that this poem is so beautiful and heartbreaking... I love it dearly, as much as I love ALL of the other poems of yours.
I just wish I could find more adjectives to describe them....