To Love Without Being Loved

by Raven Roth   Jun 17, 2005


Seconds ticking against my will
Each one drawing me closer to fate
Each one sweeping me farther from you
Slowly away
Slowly away
Love is blind to the searching eye
Love is what I feel for you
Nothing happens, Nothing will
You ignore me,I'm not even here!
I'm in love with you, is that such a crime
An undoable act of injustice
If I could fall out of incurable love with you
I'd do it in a flash
Anything to look into your eyes
Just to gaze longingly
But I'm still just an outsider
A creepy girl in your perfect eyes!
Our relationship only exists in dreams
A painful,lying,unreachable dream
A dream that cannot be true
So I will lay here without you,
In a painful,lying,unreachable dream

Shantel McDonald

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wow that was empowering keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    omg I LOVED IT
    and i feel SO identified with it
    very identified with the loving without being loved back, and the fact that the relationship seems so impossible and stuff
    he will never feel what i do for him :(
    it's really sad, but sadder the fact that besides everything i still love him

    u're very talented!!! i like very much your poems!!

    bye, take care!!

    . . . p i l i