i love this poem...im srry if this is tru....

That is soo sad I am so sorry that happened to you
that was a great poem

I believe in heaven and I believe that your parents want you to be happy because even though you can't see them they are there

Much love
Nicolette

Thank you for your comments

Great Poem.I sort of know how you feel.I lost my dad when I was younger than you.I was I think...7 or 8..For this poem, I shall give you a 5/5.

-Eulah

Oh my gosh i can not begin to understand how hard it must be.
This poem is excelent and even though some days seem like a stuggle remember your parents will always be watching you. So smile and always remember that they want you to be happy
love manda xoxox

Wow...! they'll always be with you!
truly
leanne
xXx

Im really srry about ur parents this made me sry
Take care cuz i care

Been there ah woz two its hard hen x.x.x

This poem brought tears to my eyes. It is really great, and I am so sorry for your loss.

Beautful song i'm just speechless
and i'm so sorry for that happend

Oh jeremiah. my heart goes out to you. a memorable, reaching, breath-taking poem. a beautiful dedication. your parents will be proud of your definately. they would want you to have a happy life, so please live for for yourself and for the other relatives in your family. your hardships make you a scarred person, but don't make those scars hurt you so much.

Amazing poem
u have a talent keep writing them
im so sorry to hear about ur lose

That is so beautiful. i'm sorry bout your lost. beautiful poem though.

I thought this poem was excellent.
u have sick skills

Your Poem made me Cry i know what its like to lose sum 1 u love i no longer have my dad so now i grow up with no guy to teach me to play base ball or ne guy thing im soo sorry for ur loss.

Oh wow that was probably the best poem ive ever read in my life!I really feel for you buddy!keep on writing!! your awesome!
good luck!!!

Hang in there kid. I am deeply sorry.

Nice poem man! And sad :( Keep up the work buddy.

Thatw as a really good poem. I am sorry that had to happen. My 8th grade year my grandma died and then my 9th grade year my dad died. I grew up with them because my mom didn't want me now I live with my mom and I hate hit. I miss them both so much and guess what.... they both died in a car wreck. That poem hit so close to home. GREAT JOB

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.