Wow...This is excellent. I loved how it ended. So perfect in every way. Keep up the great work. xxx

wowwowowoowowoow so powerful i like it keep it up

Muh goodness, girl, you're a talent! Great job...5/5

Brilliant! I love dark poems I think this is one of your best yet. I really enjoy reading your poems you have a great talent and way with your words! Keep it up Katie!!! ~Brooke~

That was haunting, really amazing, you write such powerful dark poems...keep it up...stay strong
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this is yet another amazing poem and definately deserves a 5/5 and more of a raitng than 4.3! wonderful job capturing and holding my attention.

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~