I love this poem it says all my frustrations about all the pain in this world that I feel powerless to stop. If only we could all take some time to consider anothers feelings, we are all a part of a never ending chain of emmotion to each other, perhaps if we heal enough breaks in the chain we can make a difference.

peace

i loved it keep up the great wrk
and thx for the comment

This poem is excellent, you have such passion and meaning to your poetry. I sincerely hope that the world can open their eyes to all these facts of life, but as much as we would love it to happen, maybe peace can only be found from within a single person to another. Great job!

Ana*

ps. (you may want to check out one of my songs, its one about helping children, you may like it;D )

hey this poem was so good, its a shame that it is true!

Hey read my today poem "You were faithless" it's really good but you can make it Excellent by you pink vote:P
Thanks Firooz

Hey great poem your a exelent writer and great person, i can tell from this poem gud job :) p.s thanxs for the coments

I really enjoyed your poem I thought that it had real meaning and it was as if the words were real. Many people don't realize it but these things are happening somewhere in the world to someone and they happen everyday. You should continue to write about these things and maybe you'll touch someone with your words and encourage more people to do more things for others. And thank you for your vote and comment I really appreciate it.

Another great one. The sad thing is the people who don't care won't until something tragic happens to them or someone they know. I wish more people cared.

~neens~

Another great one. The sad thing is the people who don't care won't until something tragic happens to them or someone they know. I wish more people cared.

~neens~

I thought that was excellent. It has so much meaning to it, its deep powerful and so true. As I was reading it, it felt so real I was like watching the events play out in my head as I was reading the words!!!