Change

by Char   Jun 17, 2005


Still a beginner... Would love comments and votes to see where I am standing... Thank you very much!

We want to improve our lives,
In any way we can,
So we go through all of the steps,
And follow a certain plan

When we want something ever so greatly,
We try to persevere,
Our determination overpowers the rest of our emotions,
And nothing can make us run away in fear

But change can also be scary,
For we don't know what to expect,
Will we go down in flames,
Or will we gain respect?

Uncertainty is like a deep black hole,
A never-ending tunnel with no light,
There are no signs to direct you,
There is no reassurance in sight

But when you do decide to change,
You'll know that you were right,
You never know how dark and lonely your life is,
Until you come up and see the light

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  • 19 years ago

    by & i still ♥ him

    i love this one, it means sooo much to me, i move a lot so this is a really good one to me!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    once again, great work. i love the rhyme sceem..it really works out. I really love your work..its terrific! keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    nother great poem!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Charlotte

    This is a really goo dpoem. I like how you played with words and I see your point of view clearly. Keep on writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem! love the third and fourth stanzas.. especially the word choice in the third...
    great work and 5/5
    -Erica