by Char Jun 17, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Still a beginner... Would love comments and votes to see where I am standing... Thank you very much! |
i love this one, it means sooo much to me, i move a lot so this is a really good one to me! |
once again, great work. i love the rhyme sceem..it really works out. I really love your work..its terrific! keep it up |
nother great poem!!! |
by Charlotte
This is a really goo dpoem. I like how you played with words and I see your point of view clearly. Keep on writing! |
awesome poem! love the third and fourth stanzas.. especially the word choice in the third... |