Fantastic, really really touching, sorry this happened, well done, the emotions came across very well and it brought a tear to my eye, beautiful, keep it up

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Thank you so much Katie. xxx

this is absolutely amazing, you mentioned it was a true story? so sad, yes inspiring....great job!

Thank you my friends. xxx

Thank you. xxx

omg that poem was soooo sad but then again sooo great, ur really gifted and have amazing talent, keep up the great work and thanks 4 the comment!!

Thank you so much. xxx

Omg this is an amazing poem. Your a great poet. That was so sad. Your very talented. Keep it up! xoxoxo

Wow.....that is truly amazing, that has to be the best poem I have ever read. There was one slight prob that didnt make sense
That she surely she would die
maybe put a comma after she? newayz, it was really really amazing keep it up!!

Hey, this poem is soo sad. But very very very good!! Awesome job, one of the best poems I have ever read. If you want you can comment and vote on my poems.

Oh my gosh that is AMAZING.. girl you have so much talent. I think that was the saddest piece of poetry i have ever written, its made me completely speechless..Well done honey listen to your heart and follow your dreams.. all my love forever megzzyxxx

Thank you so much everyone. I really appreciate all this. xxx

Long but worth the read! It was very hard for me to read. I lost me twin sister to cancer. I wrote a poem At Peace about her. My family really doesn't talk about it so I felt I needed write my feelings. Very well written *Tears* Take Care! Brooke~

Thats so kool i mean im sorry for ur loss. But that poem is so butiful i hope that u r alright. Natalie

this is an awesome poem i liked it a lot it was really sad and made me cry my aunt has cancer so i could picture this story very well. i'm sorry for your loss.

wow this was a long poem but each and ever stanza was wonderful
this was such a touching story and so sad yet beautiful
great job

hey i luvd ya poem it is very sad i hve lost many family membas to cancer so i can feel ur pain, keep writin luv kiri

omg that is one of the most saddest poems ive read but beautifully written keep up the good writing

Fantastic work... Cancer is a horrific thing, I'm sorry about what has happened to you. Excellent job!

wow this was a really sad but great poem it made me cry then agin it made me smile i am sorry for loss it must had been hard but just remember that kathleen is up there watching over all she loves.
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