wow...the last line is the stuff of nightmares! where do you get all this darkness and anger? sorry to hear you wont be about so much in future :o(

So here you lie and here we watch...
...Stuck in this desolate hell notch.
Cry and scream and scratch and beat
...The faster you run...the more bloody our treat

--YOU SCARE ME! haha, j/k. Great job once again. 5/5

ooooh! ooh ooh ooh!!!!!! wowzer. fabby poem. i love the demoniac way tis written. i love muchly. muchly i tell you.
lucyfer
xxx