My last cold breath

by Adinda   Jun 17, 2005


When the darkness is your only light
Nobody lit your way
Nobody wants to do
Then let the dark be your certain sight

When your warm blood wants to stop flowing
Your body gets slowly cold
Your body will
Then try to be prepared for going

When pain will listless murder your core
Rapidly kill your mind
Rapidly and misery
Then you stop sparkling, like burning ore

When I’ll look to reach the coming death
My heart makes my last beat
My mind stops thinking
Then I want to take my last cold breath

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  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Bennett

    Such depth in this poem. I can read the pain you felt when you wrote this. You leave me speechless

  • 19 years ago

    by Liz

    I love it!! It's so deep , keep writing shit like that out it's so inspritaling !!