that was really good i liked it 5/5

Wow...Great poem and very different...I liked this. Thank you so much for your comment. It means a lot to me. xxx

It was short, but I liked it. It was a good poem, nicely written. Good job!
Keep it up and thx for the comment*hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

hey that was SOOOOOO KEWL!!!!! not very long but who says length matters? :P 5/5 it's gr8.....thanx for the comment on my poem, i really appreciate it! Peace and Take Care, //ari\\

P.s.- MATCHBOX20 RULEZ. xP

hey great job on this one..it was very different which i think gives it something extra <5

keep writing...it was good, Rhyming worked. I'm excited to read more of your work...WRITE, write- W-R-I-T-E!
Love always,
Lyndsey

great job, i really liked it short an sweet. well i hope to see more of your awesome poems keep up the writing

love brooke