Just telling you I was your 69th visitor but the poem was really good. I liked how it flowed and it was really sweet. I gave it a 5.

i loved this poem and i liked the way you maked ti rhyme nice

That was so sweet and beautifully written! You painted a great picture for the reader! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

aww thanks i worked hard on this poem and its nice to c that it paid off

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thx