OMG ERICA THAT WAS FREAKIN GREAT!! DIDYOU REALLY WRITE THAT?!?!? those words are too big for me lol but that was really really good!! 5/5..and whoever voted a 3 needs to die

lololol thats funny thx becky

very excellent poem. you express your
feelings wonderfully. keep up the good
work. love, Marjan

great use of words..poems are great way to release your pain.. keep writing.. 6.09 on the Ronin 6.66 scale

WOW. I FEEL THE EMOTION READING THIS. GREAT JOB 5/5

omg that was such a great poem, u expressed ur feelings really well and showed ur emtion, great job!!

they was well written and flowed very well too! great job! soooo sweet!! love it!!!!(times a million! lol)
peace,
Abcede ^,^

hey thanx for commenting on my poem! keep up the good work wit urs kk?

excellent porm u used raeally good wrods 5/5

:)

Not as good as a few of your others, but was meant to prove a point, and did so wonderfully. Well done.

So sad, but beautifully written. I do appreciate the comments on my 2 poems. Your advice helped alot. Thanks. xx

aww this is another sad one..

that was excellent! a sad and painful read...you express your feelings so well in poetry. xxx

Paragraph 4...line to...should form be from?

Other than that....great poem. You can see that you are taken aback by your love for him....

~*~Christina~*~

"Sad" poem. Well written. Good work.

Well done. You're pretty talented :)

I really liked this poem, although the flow was off alittle in some parts, it was still a great write and very touching. xX

Not bad. The rhyme was pretty good.

That was a great poem :D
il read more when Im more awake but that did flow perfect and was written very well :D

Excellent work x)