oh...have you ever read the book "The Outsiders?" or seen the movie- the book is ten times better. its by S.E. Hinton- she writes other great books too, like "THat was Then, This is Now" ...anyway, i loved the poem, it was filled with a lot of emotion and the ending reminded me so much of that in "The Outsiders"...great job!!!

that was such a good poem and im so sorry if this really happened to u...if u ever need to talk u can IM me at AIM xxDARKESTDEATHxx or yahoo delisa_allen or msn/hotmail stankascanbe

Oh My God the poem was so good... i remeber i read the outsiders in grade 8 and i really loved the book and the poem in it was so nice. Your poem was really great. it was so touching. im sorry if it happened and i hope ur feeling better now... =)

I like it.its good