by Lisa Jun 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Wonderful Poem! It gave me a perfect image and feeling of what you felt and I loved the way you managed to keep it rhyming. One tip, with the style of rhythm you chose, try to make sure the syllables match up in each line. It was great and definately deserved the 5 that it got from me. ^_^ |