Pretend

by LAST RONIN   Jun 19, 2005


I pretend that you are dead
Never existed, never cared
I pretend that I never loved
Never saw you, never called
I pretend that I was never there
Never held you by my heart
I pretend that I am strong
Never parted, I never lost
I pretend because I cant take
The truth about my loss
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  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    I really liked the way you wrote this
    poem Steven. and it was so sad as usual. great poem like your other poems. take care,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Nicely put. I like it. (I'm not very good at critiquing, btw).

    :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    another nice one!!! liked it...

  • 19 years ago

    by EJ

    Very good.. it flowed very well.. your a good writer i gave ya a 5/5.. stay strong!! things will get better!! some times it takes people more time than what it does others.. bye bye EJ

    PS... thanks for commenting on my poem it really meant alot to me!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    a few words can hold a lot of meaning. short but really good. i think i know what your trying to say but then again i am just a mere reader interpreting your words from my point of view. you as the writer hold the true meaning =)

    keep up the great work

    pretending isn't the best thing...but it works...

    ~Christina

    -yea well compared to most of my friends who have eyes you'll always remember them for...i have boring brown eyes...but i like them lol =)

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