hey..thanx alot for the comment...I like you're poem..I know how it feels..

this poem is really graet.you write down what u feel and thats nice to read.keep up the good work!xoxo
<3chelsea

hey awesome poem!! your a very good writter. keep up the good work girl, your wonderful! hugs and kisses

Hey hun...Thanks for commenting on my poem! Your poem is awesome! I know exactly how you feel. I've been through the same thing...keep up the good work! ttyl! xoxo > Sam

Gorgeous i luv it i can relate 2 it so much and you really captur the feelings and stuff like you still luv some1 who betrayed u bin there, (still there)!
plrease read and comment on a few of my poems.

Hey, i know what it's like to lose the one you love, and to be ignored by them... but some things you just cant control, so try to forget the past, because tomorrow will be better and you will find someone new, who will love you

p.s. i like your quote about the unseen ...powerful