You I Thank

by Raquel   Jun 19, 2005


All alone,
My mind is blank,
I swim in tears,
It's you I thank.

Crimson blankets,
Drenched in blood,
A single rose
It screams lost love.

Rose engraved,
My weak arm throbs,
It's thorns dive in,
My life it robs.

Silence blares,
An evil twist,
You hold her tight,
I slit my wrist.

Devil grins,
My soul has sank,
I'm finally dead,
It's you I thank.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    Hey, its mary...ya know...the tortured poet...ne ways. you seem like you could write about ne thing. heres an idea...what about one about jesus dying for us...instead of us cutting our wrists? just a thought...awesome poem...i love all of urs. keep writing...5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ~lost in memories~

    that was a really good poem with great flow...it is hard to know that someone you love is with another...but i just hope that you dont go that far b/cause of one guy, you still have your whole life to find someone that will truly care!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    OMG I LOVE YOUR WORK!

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