Good poem, it has something most other poems don't. It has a modern feel to it. I like that words that you used, it made it feel more up to date and not like a mid-evil time frame. Definately an amazing poem.

Five/Five.

P.S thank you for your comment/and or vote on my poem, i really appreciate it, i will look forward to hearing your next poem (i don't read explicit things) i think your a wonderful poet and i will always comment and vote back to the ones who do that on my poems.