My dream to be kissed in the rain

by Kassie   Jun 19, 2005


I always had this silly little dream.
This dream to get kissed in the rain.
It always seemed so romantic in the movies i seen.
Little did i know that soon my dream would come true,
and the best part about it is i would share it with you.
You took me by the hand and we walked down the driveway.
By now i knew that my dream was going to come true,
this was definitely the day.
You stopped and pulled me toward you,
as you slowly put your hands around my waist...
leaned in to wards me and soon it was only your lips that i could taste.
The drops fell upon us as we stood there and kissed in the rain,
and i knew after this i wouldn't feel the same.
You made my dream come true,
and i don't know what to say.
Except I'm glad that it was you that kissed me in the rain.

*It sucks.. yes i know. But please comment anyways, and let me know what you think.

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  • 19 years ago

    by _simply irresistible_

    hey awesome poem. it didnt suck at all girl! lol that has always been a dream of mine but im still waitin for it to come true. anyways great job and keep up the terrific work! hugs and kisses

  • 19 years ago

    by karen

    that didn't suck..i loved it!! 5/5! keep up the good work..thanks for the comment on mine!

  • 19 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    kissed in the rain? Not bad - keep up the good words.

  • 19 years ago

    by :)butterfly_girl:)

    That was a great poem. it didnt suck at all. great job. That has always been my dream too and it still is but i just havent found that one right guy that i want to be kissed by in the rain but i know one day i will.

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    no it doesn't suck..it sounds like it comes from the heart...real sweet..could be a really REALLY great poem with some revising

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