Thanks For Nothing

by The-Blood-Vile   Jun 19, 2005


I know i tend to scare you
I scare myself sometimes

But when I need you most right there
right beside my side
I turn to lean on you and
fall all the way to the ground

Cause when I trusted you to catch me
You did not save me then

So now I will do the same
But it just seems to inhumane

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  • 19 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww dis was a gwd poem n sad.. n soz though
    keep writing kk tc mwa luv ya xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    The last stanza does sit quite right, but I think that's in the wording, not the focus.

    Replacing But with Although or something similar will give it more strength. But then this isn't my vision it's yours.

    Nicely concise and to the point!

    B

  • 19 years ago

    by Brae

    that was a great poem. it reminds me of my friend and i. keep up the good work!

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