Comments : Your life ended

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    awww me to im very sorry, i guess we got sumpn in common, i lost my sis! i know how you feel and i hope you stay strong, very nice poem, i really felt what you wear feeling..
    5/5
    xox Bam ps thanks for the comment on my poem

  • 19 years ago

    by virginia micklow

    hey
    thanks for your comment also. i'll do my best. see my brother wasn't just killed when the truck hit him it cut his car into and b/c of all the gasoline and diesal fuel and the truck dragging him across the road for 200 ft. the sparks ignited an explosion and burnt my brother beyond recognition they had to identify him by dental records. all i wanted was to say goodbye and hug him once more and i couldnt do that. my brother weighed 208 lb. and 6"4 all that was left was 164lb. and 64 in.and they delivered his right foot seperate to the body bag. i miss him so much but your right i have to be strong 'cause nobody else is.

  • 19 years ago

    by virginia micklow

    your a really great poet and keep up the good work.