by Esmeralda Jun 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The love we had |
I was DarkTinkerbel btw but I'm commenting now because ur poems hav different means now I think this is brilliantly truthful and a good combination of love and hurt |
Thts amazing except the last line i think it should be however much I love I won't let my hurt grow maybe but thts abit long? n e way i think it needs rewording... plz comment and vote on a few of mine |