that is sad, i really loved reading it. i feel so sorry for you. if you would like, please have a look at some of my poems. stay strong xxx
luv steph

That's very touching...i'm so sorry. But it's a very good poem. 5/5 I'm here if you wanna talk. Again, so sorry about your loss. Peace and So Much Luv and So Many Tite Hugs, //Ari\\

Hey hey forgot to tell u...WELCOME TO THE SITE!!! :) //Ariana\\

hey.

thats a really sad poem..i got tears in my eyes..it is a good poem:(

I'm so sorry to hear about your father. That is really hard to go through, I can't even imagine how difficult it is for you... But that is great to see that you are taking it well as far as I can see. Excellent job on your poem, very well done... 5/5

Hunny I"m really sorry if you wanna talk about it my email it crimson_tears_1116@yahoo.com
stay strong
~Nikki~

awe...sad but beautiful...great write

this is a sad but good poem
great job

hey... that's an awesome poem... you have a lot of talent, courage, and strength... i just lost my grandfather a couple months ago... he was my best friend... if you ever need to talk, email me!!

its a really good poem and really touching good luck w/ur poems

Wow
This is an amazing poem
I'm so sorry about your dad.
But someone is there to catch your tears.
Stay strong and have hope
Emma x

Very touching5/5

hi, i no how you feel, my dads gone to. your poem is sooo powerfull, it made me go to tears. gd luck and im sorry about your dad. keep strong!! xxxxxxxxxxxx

omg i love it, so sad! i'm really sorry about your dad, hope your holding up ok. must have been real tough, but you wrote a wonderfully put poem.

~PLP~ lil slam~

it was very moving..its hard to right about loved ones being gone 5/5

This was so sad it brought tears to my eyes this c\sucks when you lose someone close i lost my grand ma and it still hurts even after all these years.

Wow. That was so good. It was such a heart-breaking poem (like in a goodway). So many people complain about their dads but I can't believe we take them for granted so often. I promise I will pray for you an dall the people who have lost someone important to them.

If you want take a look at my poems. I'm not as well a writer as I wish to be because I love writing so much, but I do try so it's all good.

Thanx so much for sharing this poem with everyone..

-Amanda

hey, im so sorry to hear about your dad, i kinda know how it feels to lose something you love soooooo much, your poem rules, my email is spott_14@hotmail.com we should chat sometime... xoxoxox
KiddysAngel

it's a wonderful poem. i'm touched. you are very talented. but i'm really sorry about your father.

beth, now im crying!!