Awsome poem! very emotional.

Sorry abought you dad! I love your poem

i can't imagine what it could be like losing a father. Its so amazing how can write about it and let other poeple in on a little bit of how you must feel. Great work and keep writing you're really good at it.

wow that was really good. It made me have chills.

wow, it's so great you can write a poem about your father's death. if i had faced that then i could never reveal my feelings. great poem, keep it up. if you can please comment me on my poem "I" and others if you can :)

thats a really good poem. 5/5!

That was one of the greatest poems I have ever read! I'm sorry about your dad. I know how hard it is to lose someone. Keep your chin up. Good luck in the future. If you would please check out my poem Addicts it's my first and it would mean alot to me. thanks and good luck!

Ace, if uve been writing for years, where are they?

i am really sorry about your dad! You are a very strong person, for writing about it. 5/5
Hayley-Ree xxx

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luv kiri xoxo

love it

i am really sorry about your dad. i wish you and your family the best of luck.

Oh, wow, i'm still crying! that poem was so deep, and i know you have heard a lot of this, and i won't express my pity, but wow...i'm speechless...continue writing, you have amazing talent

wow, thats really good. i have this poem i wrote called daddy about my dad, but my dad isnt dead he just never wanted a kid, and i guess i'd kind of rather have known my dad and knew he loved me and lost him than know he never wanted me, but yeah...it's hard either way

this poem was good. i liked it. very touching

i really like this poem.

AW thats amazing and increadably sad.... beautiful work.. thanx for sharing

This was very sad, but beautiful. Im sorry about your dad; i (halfway) know how you feel. still, awesome poem.

5/5

-Allanah

Excellent poem, keep writing x x x x take kare x x x

This is a beautiful poem..keep it up sweetheart..
-sarah