I loved the idea of this peom rather than the poem itself, which i hope doesn't cause you offence. I always kinda switch off when someone describes the individual movements of anything sexual...i realize the poem isn't really about that...and that i what i love...the message behind it...that all these movements are suggesting an awareness of how fragile you are.

I hope this laddy treasures you.

I like the idea of delicate dedication... a lot.

Take out the bull and replace it with a fluffy kitten in the china shop.

There's not much under the surface here (maybe stuff we have already discussed) so I'll just read it once more and absorb the moment.

Soothing words, K.

wow, kaitlin. this is excellent writing. i really enjoyed reading this. i love it.

5.5

love and hugs

i love it, and i'm glad you posted one even tho you said u weren't going to post as much. i'm a loyal reader and i always love reading your stuff. it seems so refreshing everytime. It always makes you want to call up your guy and tell him to come over ;-) Well please continue to post, i love reading it.
~selina

So very sweet and beautiful . To surrender your body ad soul to love . Excellent poem that should be given the praise it well deserves .